Machinima Script

This may have taken me quiet some time, I have intended on posting this for some time now but only to forget 2 minutes later. So here it is...my script.
Machinima Script:

Character 1: Owen, Character 2: Shawn
Scene 1:
Cut 1:
Running footsteps and heavy breathing of Owen.
Heavy rain with sounds of wind blowing, with sounds of freighters and ship horns.
No dialog in this scene.
Cut 2:
More heavy breathing + rain sounds and footsteps.
Ambient sounds of ships and freighters docking.
No dialog.
Cut 3:
Rain sounds and sounds of ships/freighters.
No dialog.
Cut 4:
Music starts.
Footsteps of Shawn on metal material.
Shawn nears the middle of a platform and sets up his sniper rifle.
No dialog.
Cut 5:
Calm controlled breathing by Shawn as he targets his prey in the scope.
Music stops.
Shawn: “steady….”
Cut 6:
Black screen with the words “2 years ago in the Arizona Desert”
No sound
Cut 7:
Ambient sounds of a desert in Arizona.
Cut 8:
You hear very light footsteps of another person.
The man is Owen.
He pulls out a pistol and shoots Shawn in the leg.
Shawn: “(pain)”
Cut 9, 10, 11, 12:
Owen: “Hello Shawn….”
Shawn: “Don’t do this Owen, it’s not wor….”
Owen: “SHUT UP!! I’m the one with the gun.”
Shawn: “Look whatever you think I did, it was not me.”

Owen: “Whatever I think!? I KNOW! What you did…”
Shawn: “…..”
Owen: “Yeah you know what I am talking about.”
Shawn: “Please it wasn’t me…I was setup, you have to believe me!”
Owen: “I don’t care! Because as far as I know you did it.”
Owen: “Good bye Shawn…”
Shawn: “NO! Come on….agghhh…you don’t have to do this...”
Owen shoots Shawn in the stomach.
Cut 13:
No Sound
Black screen with words saying “Present day at the Docks”
Cut 14:
Music starts.
Shawn is has his finger on the trigger.
There is heavy breathing.
Shawn pulls the trigger and you hear a silenced rifle sound.
Cut 15:
Owen falls from the gun shot wound.
Cut 16, 17, 19:
Owen: “hhhh….mmmphhh…”
Shawn: “You know Owen its funny how things pan out”
Owen: “You find this funny?”
Shawn: “I find it funny that I was in exactly the same situation as you are now…”
Owen: “It was your fault Shawn!”
Shawn: “My fault? MY FAULT!!?
Shawn: “YOU killed my family, YOU tried to kill me…I do not see how this puts me at fault.”
Owen: “Shawn please I did not know…I…I…thought…arghhh….please Shawn don’t do this.”
Shawn: “Fuck you! I’ll see you in hell!”
Owen: “Noo! Please…oh God! Noooooooo!!”
- Shawn shoots Owen in the head.

please feel free to flame this very, very poor script.